she likes to eat reverb off of fat faces
laced with stratagem smiles
waiving to comfort
us free slaves
so she can spit it
back out in spades
and help save the day
for the few who choose
to Believe
Hello Dverse, Thank you for coming over to read the second poem linked for Dverse. The first line is on a mixed media project I had made awhile back, but I think it’s a fun idea and can be used for many other expressions.
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I can only concur with what others have written Ms Hannah – you articulate well with your pen – that first 2 lines simply had to read and re-read – thank you. :-)
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That’s such a brilliant opening line. So. Damn. Good.
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laced with stratagem smiles <wonderful! there's a real pleasure in your word choices.
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Thank You !
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Love that you packed so much ambiguity into so few words. Last line=very dramatic.
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Awesome! Thank You:)
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The first line can and should be used again!
The accompanying image is a bold, effective choice.
Best,
Ana
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Thank you Ana:)
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Wow. We all need that courage to make that leap to belief. You packed a lot into several potent words. Nice.
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Thank You!
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Ah, the power of courage! The media project sounds interesting.
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:)!
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She sounds like quite a law of nature!
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:) !
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ah that i call courage indeed…. we need people like her! cool on the multi media project as well..will you tell us more about it…? smiles
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Thank you. Well I’m just teaching myself about types of art, aside from pencil and stippling I do. My mind needs freedom! awgh:) so I just tried collaging within a paint box with eclectic items and poetry explaining the theme. Just fun. :)
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Really strong, yet with only a few lines. Wow!
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Thank you Linda:)
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Some pretty wild imagery. I like the reverb line the best.
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Thanks a lot!
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Incredible imagery. Wow.
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Thank you! I really appreciate that
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Love it, the line ‘laced with stratagem smiles’ is sticking with me (in a good way.) Great imagery.
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Thanks a lot:) …I think that can be used in sooo many ways too.
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damn. what an opening line eh?
free slaves…
still believe…
tight little write, so whats up with the mixed media project?
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Thank you:) ahh just teaching myself about different kinds of art,more hands on than drawing and stippling I do. Collaging with eclectic items and using a paint box and with poetry for story. I thought back to kindergarten projects I used to do. Fun stuff for creating and freeing the mind:)
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